I Had A Dream Poem by Lyn Paul

I Had A Dream

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I had a dream
The most amazing dream
I was still;
In a beautiful Rose Coffin
Laced with silk
My loved ones were crying
I didn't understand, why?
I was so... glamorous
My makeup, my hair, silky PJ's
But Why?
Why were they crying?
In this room
There was Love, Support
But; Strength was missing
I then spoke
'I won't let you go'
No response
I knew then
My Journey had ended
A new beginning
'Alarm Bell'
I woke from that dream







Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Wednesday, August 29, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

Laced with silk. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nigel Norton 14 December 2015

That was deep old girl....

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Whisperkwane Lamb 06 September 2012

OOOOOOOOOOO scary alive in a silk lined bed...mmm you see far into your wn life...that is what we as people can do...most of do not believe...but dreams...we need to take heed to...you may have open some eyes of minds that have been closed...thans for sharing...

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Valerie Dohren 01 September 2012

Quite a dream, beautifully expressed - you make our passing seem to be very peaceful.

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Unwritten Soul 30 August 2012

That would be a nightmare for someone else who dear to you...but this is the nature of life, everyone that come should return...just hope for our eternal bliss the everlasting time we want to live and that dream is we must always dream to be...hopefully_Unwritten Soul

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