Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 42,272 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

Gift Of Giving - Poem by Lyn Paul

Open your eyes
Open your heart
Give just a little
You will get such alot
Let the sunshine in
Even when there is rain
The warmth of your heart
Will warm someone elses
Two hands are better than one
One opened heart
Will welcome two warm hands
Open your heart
Love is not just romance
Love is... loving who you are
To love life
To love to give
Our journey in life
Is to open those eyes
Feel the beauty in your heart
Give the gift
The gift of giving



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship, giving, hope, inspiration, journey, love and life


Comments about Gift Of Giving by Lyn Paul

  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (12/5/2019 4:23:00 PM)

    A very heartwarming write
    imbued with insight and kindness.
    A meaningful message to humanity.
    If we are guided by the wisdom in this marvelous
    write, what a wonderful and peaceful world we would
    have.
    Beautifully written.
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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (11/15/2019 7:21:00 AM)

    Art of giving is a great art that only a generous soul can feel and understand! A great poem! My favorite lines: To love to give/our journey in life/Is to open those eyes/Feel the beauty in your heart. A poem of value and substance carrying great impact and influence............10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • (11/6/2019 5:59:00 PM)

    Some good positive messages. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/14/2019 8:35:00 PM)

    A truly positive poem, dear Lyn.

    Thank you so much for comment on my Leading The Way.
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  • Adeeb Alfateh (7/7/2019 3:29:00 AM)

    Open your heart
    Love is not just romance
    Love is... loving who you are
    To love life
    To love to give
    Our journey in life
    Is to open those eyes

    superb feelings expressed
    great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (2/23/2019 9:04:00 PM)

    Opening eyes we feel the tenderness of beat of heart. In each act we feel greatness of life. Love is not just the romance but love is a brad sense of feelings. In journey of life love is the gift from God. We feel eternal love through nature. God's love motivates us definitely and interestingly. This lovely poem is full of love....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kanav Justa (8/30/2018 6:47:00 AM)

    Reading you after a long time. I have so much of yours poems to read now: p (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/29/2018 3:20:00 AM)

    excellent-

    Love is not just romance
    Love is... loving who you are

    10+++
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  • Britte Ninad (5/16/2018 3:49:00 AM)

    wow nice definition of love-

    loving who you are
    To love life
    To love to give
    ....
    ...
    Feel the beauty in your heart
    Give the gift
    The gift of giving

    ....great +10
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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/27/2018 8:29:00 PM)

    Lyn, a well worked write. It has inspirational written all over it.+++10


    Robert
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/3/2018 2:25:00 AM)

    It is a beautiful poem on love and life having haunting expression and groovy collocation. I am too glad that this poem has been selected as the poem of the day. Lately receive my congratulation and thanks as well. (Report)Reply

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  • Annette Aitken (9/10/2016 9:35:00 AM)

    Your message in your writes are always so pure yet so powerfull....

    Annette
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  • Ency Bearis (4/11/2016 11:50:00 PM)

    Spellbind poem, it deserve to be the poem of the day. Congratulations! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard Snyder (4/11/2016 9:41:00 PM)

    What a warm and pleasant poem.This poem is definitely deserving of being recognized as 'poem of the day. A great poem from an awesome individual. Congrats Lyn! (Report)Reply

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  • Norah Tunney (4/11/2016 6:01:00 PM)

    In the end all that matters is love
    Well done Lyn
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  • Bill Galvin (4/11/2016 5:46:00 PM)

    Lyn, well done... congratulations! Great sentiment, expressed simply and beautifully. (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (4/11/2016 11:11:00 AM)

    Congrats Lyn. Well deserved! (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (4/11/2016 11:10:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful and positive poem that motivates us to be givers, Well done my friend! (Report)Reply

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  • Clarence Prince (4/11/2016 8:28:00 AM)

    Open your eyes
    Open your heart
    Give just a little
    Give the gift, the gift of giving.
    Oh, what a great world we could've had....
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  • Savita Tyagi (4/11/2016 7:34:00 AM)

    Loving life with open heart. Love yourself as well as others....nothing is greater than that. Congratulations for being poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, December 18, 2017


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