Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 42,278 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

My Heart Will Always Sing - Poem by Lyn Paul

In life
I have given
So much
Always been there
Giving
Constantly giving
Never
Asking for anything
For giving
Not wanting anything
For giving
Pure fulfilment
from giving
Have I given too much?
Respect lost
Why?
What, from giving? No matter what my gift is Giving; it has been worth it..
For I know. Others have gained.
What I have lost. I guess there is reason.
I must not lose
My gift
Of giving




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: believe, giving, heart, loss, love and pain


Comments about My Heart Will Always Sing by Lyn Paul

  • Drtony Brahmin (4/5/2019 7:23:00 AM)

    For giving
    Not wanting anything
    For giving
    Pure fulfilment
    from giving
    Have I given too much? what a great attitude, this is the attitude of Jesus Christ and Mother Theresa. God bless you to give even more and pray for me so that i may also give everything for the poor. tony
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  • (8/20/2018 8:44:00 PM)

    To give is good for the soul. Yours is in good shape judging by this poem.

    Thank yo so much Lyn for commenting on my poem.
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  • Louis Rams (2/26/2018 7:19:00 PM)

    your gift of giving still lingers to this day, for you touched the hearts in so many ways (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (2/1/2018 8:15:00 PM)

    Lovely lines that are loaded with love that could only be written by a sensitive soul. Well done my friend! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/21/2017 9:52:00 AM)

    a truly wonderful poem of a wonderful way to lead one's life? .............wonderfully written Lyn (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (3/15/2017 8:05:00 AM)

    The greatest act of charity is charity towards the uncharitable. You've painted a powerful picture of charity and its reality. A poem that fosters the universal brotherhood of man. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing Lyn and do remain blessed. (Report)Reply

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  • Cris Ben (7/12/2016 10:24:00 PM)

    oh my god! i can totally relate again (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (3/19/2016 10:57:00 PM)

    I remember words of my mother, ' Always keep your hands upward, a giver is greater than taker'. A great share. Thanks and Regards.10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/25/2015 10:46:00 AM)

    Actually, You Are The Gift!
    Dorothy-APWLTS
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  • Melvina Germain (10/24/2015 10:04:00 PM)

    Giving is a gift within itself and truthfully its between God and you...Excellent poem..... (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (9/23/2015 5:37:00 AM)

    No matter what my gift is Giving; it has been worth it..
    For I know. Others have gained.
    What I have lost. I guess there is reason.
    I must not lose
    My gift
    Of giving.. A lovely poem on the beauty of giving. this is a spiritual poem. this poem is born from the experience of giving. only such a person can write this. thank you
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  • Amitava Sur (8/28/2015 2:01:00 PM)

    A lovely poem Lyn, speaking about your mind what it desires to do, constantly giving, never asking for anything Very nice. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (6/21/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    Your heart is a pure heart as it is filled with the joys of giving. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/8/2015 7:43:00 PM)

    Selflessness is a blessing, never a lose. You express much wisdom and some kind of poetical knowledge that is enviable. God bless you (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/2/2015 4:09:00 AM)

    Very nicely and aptly presented. A beautiful poems with best word choice. Many thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/28/2015 7:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! I hope you never lose the gift of giving becuase whatever is given in love is never lost. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (12/16/2014 11:35:00 AM)

    the gift of giving is a precious gift nice writing (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (12/23/2012 11:45:00 PM)

    I revisit this poem again... and now i see how much wise you have to move your heart to keep singing even the days is always a noise and not a complementing your singing...i will learn from you a lot_Soul (Report)Reply

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  • (12/9/2012 8:55:00 PM)

    Strikes a chord... when I'm under the most intense onslaughts of the beast it's always immensely beneficial to find another in need and give them my shoulder to lean on and my ear to listen. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/8/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    Your heart is refined highly and the idea of always Giving fills you with untold pleasure. And for that purpose it is really good to GIVE.. I completely fall in line with your thought.! An exemplary poem, very enjoyable.! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 28, 2018


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