Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 25,504 Points (17.03.1965)

My Heart Will Always Sing - Poem by Lyn Paul

In life
I have given
So much
Always been there
Giving
Constantly giving
Never
Asking for anything
For giving
Not wanting anything
For giving
Pure fulfilment
from giving
Have I given too much?
Respect lost
Why?
What, from giving? No matter what my gift is Giving; it has been worth it..
For I know. Others have gained.
What I have lost. I guess there is reason.
I must not lose
My gift
Of giving




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: giving, heart, loss, love and pain


Comments about My Heart Will Always Sing by Lyn Paul

  • Chinedu Dike (3/15/2017 8:05:00 AM)


    The greatest act of charity is charity towards the uncharitable. You've painted a powerful picture of charity and its reality. A poem that fosters the universal brotherhood of man. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing Lyn and do remain blessed. (Report) Reply

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  • Cris Ben (7/12/2016 10:24:00 PM)


    oh my god! i can totally relate again (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (3/19/2016 10:57:00 PM)


    I remember words of my mother, ' Always keep your hands upward, a giver is greater than taker'. A great share. Thanks and Regards.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/25/2015 10:46:00 AM)


    Actually, You Are The Gift!
    Dorothy-APWLTS
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  • Melvina Germain (10/24/2015 10:04:00 PM)


    Giving is a gift within itself and truthfully its between God and you...Excellent poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/23/2015 5:37:00 AM)


    No matter what my gift is Giving; it has been worth it..
    For I know. Others have gained.
    What I have lost. I guess there is reason.
    I must not lose
    My gift
    Of giving.. A lovely poem on the beauty of giving. this is a spiritual poem. this poem is born from the experience of giving. only such a person can write this. thank you
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (8/28/2015 2:01:00 PM)


    A lovely poem Lyn, speaking about your mind what it desires to do, constantly giving, never asking for anything Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (6/21/2015 12:52:00 PM)


    Your heart is a pure heart as it is filled with the joys of giving. (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2015 7:43:00 PM)


    Selflessness is a blessing, never a lose. You express much wisdom and some kind of poetical knowledge that is enviable. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/2/2015 4:09:00 AM)


    Very nicely and aptly presented. A beautiful poems with best word choice. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Elisha Wall (1/28/2015 7:01:00 AM)


    Beautiful write! I hope you never lose the gift of giving becuase whatever is given in love is never lost. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (12/16/2014 11:35:00 AM)


    the gift of giving is a precious gift nice writing (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/23/2012 11:45:00 PM)


    I revisit this poem again... and now i see how much wise you have to move your heart to keep singing even the days is always a noise and not a complementing your singing...i will learn from you a lot_Soul (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2012 8:55:00 PM)


    Strikes a chord... when I'm under the most intense onslaughts of the beast it's always immensely beneficial to find another in need and give them my shoulder to lean on and my ear to listen. (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2012 8:17:00 AM)


    Your heart is refined highly and the idea of always Giving fills you with untold pleasure. And for that purpose it is really good to GIVE.. I completely fall in line with your thought.! An exemplary poem, very enjoyable.! (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (12/7/2012 4:11:00 AM)


    Love the set up for poem, nicely written beautiful, theres none more rewarding then giving someone a reason to smile (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (12/2/2012 4:17:00 AM)


    Beautiful! This is me all over too! I do question it occasionally but mostly I can't help it! But I have learnt to put me first a bit more! It's about finding a balance as not everyone thinks the same way obviously! This poem made me shed a tear for some reason! I think a good reason! (Report) Reply

  • So Close (12/1/2012 11:48:00 PM)


    good one.i should appreciate your attitude, in this busy world people give more importance for getting than giving. someday, somewhere you should get the result. (Report) Reply

  • Karoliena Somura (12/1/2012 4:18:00 PM)


    Nice Theme and well written. This reminds me of this JApanese story, The Fool who gave everything, even the clothes on his back, until he had nothing. Then a goblin asked him for his eyes and body, because he wwas hungry and needed to feed. The man gave it to him, until he was only left with his head, then the goblin said here you go, a present. and it was a slip of paper that said Fool, but the old man shed tears from his eyeless head and said tHank you, this is the first time anyone has given me anything. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/1/2012 11:01:00 AM)


    There is indeed more pleasure in giving than in receiving and that pleasure lingers long! If the world gets populated with people of your stream of thought, Heaven will come down to the Earth! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 9, 2015


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