Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 32,235 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

Alone But Not Lonely - Poem by Lyn Paul

Alone but not lonely
Broke yet not poor
Down, yet not out
Smiling, but not laughing

Blessed yet not enriched
Hurting though not pained
Hearing but not heard
Risen yet not rising
Old but not elderly

Living..... Though, Not alive
Sweet and never sweetened
Angered though not angry
Fearing..... but not afraid

Awake and often woken
Beautiful, Inside and out
Anxious to lose these anxieties
To find again real life

Honest...Yes
Too honest
Now
Hungry for success


Alone but not lonely



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1st March 2015
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, anger, believe, honesty, loneliness, pain


Comments about Alone But Not Lonely by Lyn Paul

  • (5/16/2018 3:46:00 AM)


    It messages to me the gravity of mind, the confidence and confidential worth living..

    nicely written..great +10
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  • Valentin Savin (12/30/2017 2:34:00 AM)


    Well penned. Such a nice poem. I enjoyed it very much. Be always happy and joyfull and write more. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (11/21/2017 3:47:00 AM)


    A witty reflection elegantly brought forth in beautiful diction with conviction. Lovely and insightful. Thanks for sharing Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (4/14/2017 2:55:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem, sometimes true strength and resolve comes from the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Mary-lisa Russo (9/25/2016 9:26:00 PM)


    Lovely! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you kindly for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Annette Aitken (8/21/2016 11:49:00 AM)


    Its like your reading my soul...great write

    Annette
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  • Louis Rams (7/30/2016 10:59:00 PM)


    this enlightened my heart like finding this poem in a bottle while stranded on an island and
    left without hope. thanks for sharing
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  • Cris Ben (7/12/2016 10:20:00 PM)


    this poem says a lot about the decision i made for my life now. (Report) Reply

  • Cigeng Zhang (4/29/2016 11:07:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem with the sea picture. Look at the vast sea when we feel lonely. It will be better. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Untamed Heart (4/25/2016 2:58:00 AM)


    Wow! beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (4/21/2016 9:34:00 AM)


    Eloquently written Lyn. I'm surprised I hadn't commented and rated this sooner! Great stuff! ! (Report) Reply

  • Norah Tunney (4/16/2016 10:40:00 PM)


    Honest original and profound
    Well written
    Thank you Lyn
    Full marks
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  • Savita Tyagi (4/13/2016 8:46:00 AM)


    Beautiful. This is the stage we all pass through. A very poetic expression of life's reality. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (2/23/2016 4:47:00 PM)


    i sometimes indulge for days in the sorting through of very mediocre poetry. i am tempted to write scathing comments on syntax, punctation and the like as you saw in my sarcastic little piece. in your case, this is, not the case. you are a very talented writer. and coincidentally as a child my favorite comedian was Paul Lynde. be well. (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Sinicrope (2/7/2016 10:49:00 PM)


    Sounds like a poem about starting over when one is no longer young but not yet old. It's a scary but exciting proposition captured in your writing. Thanks for sharing! :) (Report) Reply

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (1/25/2016 7:33:00 PM)


    Excellent write Lynn, reminded me of 2 Corinthians 4: 8. I like the style you used here, straight but profound, spontaneous and striking at the same time. The poem's simplicity makes is beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (1/9/2016 2:01:00 PM)


    very nice admission i picked ur name form some audition where i also spoke about women

    A 12 year old daughter etc etc step she.....bloated.............. by his.............

    sad such things happen
    but then guys write books and earn
    teach those baaaass to use condoms
    if they enter small kids at random
    sad their minds are at tandem

    as women want them in theirs often
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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/5/2016 5:54:00 AM)


    Thank you so much for sharing this awesome poem, (Report) Reply

  • Nigel Norton (11/30/2015 10:16:00 AM)


    Really made me think of myself within, and I'm not a thinker.... (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 7:02:00 PM)


    'alone but not lonely'.................a nice poem! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 3, 2018


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