Alone but not lonely
Broke yet not poor
Down, yet not out
Smiling, but not laughing
Blessed yet not enriched
Hurting though not pained
Hearing but not heard
Risen yet not rising
Old but not elderly
Living..... Though, Not alive
Sweet and never sweetened
Angered though not angry
Fearing..... but not afraid
Awake and often woken
Beautiful, Inside and out
Anxious to lose these anxieties
To find again real life
Honest...Yes
Too honest
Now
Hungry for success
Alone but not lonely
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1st March 2015
Lyn Paul
Really made me think of myself within, and I'm not a thinker....
Excellent write Lynn, reminded me of 2 Corinthians 4: 8. I like the style you used here, straight but profound, spontaneous and striking at the same time. The poem's simplicity makes is beautiful.
This poem gets you the recognition that you deserve dear poetess...a great poem!
One feels the positive energy of the poem gets rubbed on one's soul. Life is worth living.
A very profound write. Exudes positivity. Power of Endurance. A fitting ode to life. Loved reading.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes! ! ! The inward battle. Feeling...but not giving in to negativity. Accepting pain and loss...not allowing it to become your master, but rather mastering the emotion.