Just Another Poet Girl

I Hate My Life - Poem by Just Another Poet Girl

I hate my life and don't ask why
Cause you might think its just a lie
Everyone hates me, Everyone left me
I know that it sounds crazy
But its true, if you can see
Be what you can be
I feel invisible but no one cares
Loneliness is what i cant bare
Tears run down, my eyes start to sting
I'm running out of tears, but i Kept on Crying
No more tears, need to cry more
Blood replaced my tears, but spilling out more
My heart beats slower, my breathing becomes shallow
I fall on the ground, everything becomes blury
I can die right now since no one cares
Yes, that's what I should do
I close my eyes
I'll go to my dreamworld
My heart stops beating
My body stays still, my soul breaks and smiles no more.

Comments about I Hate My Life by Just Another Poet Girl

  • (6/25/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    i really like this cause even though its like the tenth 'hate my life' poem ive read its diffrent from teh rest its not jsut a list it has proper emotion great point of view keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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  • (2/10/2008 9:36:00 AM)

    The Golden Bird Of Hope

    I never realized that...

    That golden bird could sing for me
    It was always over there you see
    So far, away, yet
    Calling me

    Singing words, its sweet, sweet song
    So far my friend -
    So long, so long…

    Perhaps another day, I’ll reach you
    Perhaps another day I’ll teach you

    So long my friend-
    So long,

    Why my bird was always sleeping
    I could only try and guess
    It seemed so lifeless and out of tune
    But this golden bird, would find its rest

    Then one day at my window
    The frost upon the lawn
    It sung from places
    Only dreamt
    But this time heard -
    No song –
    , 'So long'

    Step into my garden
    Sleep under my tree
    And the sweetest music you’ve ever heard
    The universe, is free

    The winter sleeping
    Nothing broke
    Suddenly, it sings
    The willow somehow stills its weeping
    From where the laughter rings

    Each fear that you have ever felt
    Each gray
    Becomes a bloom
    The trees so full in blossom
    The dawn’s new chorus
    Casting gloom

    The gardener appears
    Smiling as he stands
    And the golden bird
    Lands in his hands
    No more… you’ll see
    So Long, So long
    For you my darling
    Are coming home

    duncan wyllie
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  • (11/26/2007 2:09:00 AM)

    is this really how u feel?
    hope not...
    anyways, again an awesome poem soo emotional.. i can also relate this to myself... life sure is a sad place...
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  • (7/21/2007 8:30:00 AM)

    You have the making of a great poem, my dear. Keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2007 8:59:00 AM)

    there's pain in every line..emotions unfold, at least.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

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