I Have Tried Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Have Tried

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So many times I have tried to end
Attempted at many things to mend
Bring about some attitudinal change
As it was very much within my range

I have liked peace and silence
It is helps you to feel better and not feel tense
I had read somewhere one beautiful sentence
'Come to me any time whenever you want my presence'

I have observed prevalennce of peace in temples
I have seen happy people while coming out from mosques
How happily children and their parent visit church?
Their only aim is to get blessings and feel as such

But one thing is certain and possible
An individual need not run away while facing the troubles
Life as such is not easy and full of struggle
The peace can not be had in dense forest or jungle

No doubt it takes us away from hustle and bustle
Where even little sound can be heard from whistle
I used to perform meditation early in hours
Some sound from insects used to all in ears

There is something like magic in prayer's call
It gives peace and mental stability to all
It has no religious affinity but a simple exercise
Lot many changes are witnessed with surprise

It is direct contact with invisible power
It may be granted or gained by only fewer
It requires tremendous strength to gain access
The brightness and radiance may be seen on face

You are away from physical world
No worry, no hurry and everything is pushed into cold
Body may remain physically on ground
The soul may be far off to a place and never found

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

ANALIA FREE P.. No worry, no hurry... that is meditation. Thank you.

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Justin Reamer 13 August 2012

This is a very good poem. It is very well-written, and I can feel your emotion in it. I enjoyed it a lot.

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 August 2012

The benefits people get by silent prayers, worshiping, meditating by visiting abodes of God are said in a nice language. But when the people are misled by misinterpreting the teachings of the holy books, the places of worship become breeding centres of terror. A mind solacing, calm atmosphere prevails in this poem. Rated *****

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

So many times I have tried to end Attempted at many things to mend Bring about some attitudinal change As it was very much within my range

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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