I Hope You Can Hear Me.... Poem by Roshni Menon

I Hope You Can Hear Me....

Rating: 5.0


I still cant believe that your'e no longer there,
You left me alone, you didn't even care.
You went away on your own,
You left me out here all alone.
Even as I wipe away the tears thats I've wept,
I still cant believe that you have left.
I was always waiting for you, behind an open door,
But you went to God instead, maybe He loved you more.
I still remember the joys that we shared,
And also a few wounds that were unrepaired,
If I've ever hurt you, I am really sorry,
I didn't mean it, please don't be mad at me.
Wherever you are, I just want you to know,
That I will miss you, and it will always be so.
For you haven't left me, your'e around here still,
I will never forget you...I never will.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 13 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Roshni. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Surya . 24 March 2010

hi menon, never thought such poigant poem ill appea here.so touching.was it real happening? any way way voted full marks 10 would you care to read'potraits of the innocents'.it might help deviate the mood luv ravi

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Pradyumna Jyotir 24 March 2010

Somehow...this poem reflects my story...poignant.....read my poems u'll understand....

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