Wednesday, September 2, 2009

I Hope You Listen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes
I’m a fragile autumn leaf
Blowing through your city
And crumbling at your door.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

even if she doesn't, others have and will.....it is not for naught......

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

sad fact penned with beautiful imageries! truely you capturing beayty and truth as stated in biogra... 10+

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The lead in to the poem with the first stanza is stunning as the imagery of the leaf is captivating and you have written a lovely poem. 10 love Karin

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Milica Franchi De Luri 02 September 2009

i fill you frustration, trying to get someone to listen.........

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Sandra Fowler 02 September 2009

Very eloquent. Those autumn leaves will whisper about all the poets that have mattered in this world. They know your name.10/10 Kind wishes, Sandra

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