I Hope You Listen Poem by Uriah Hamilton

I Hope You Listen

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes
I’m a fragile autumn leaf
Blowing through your city
And crumbling at your door.

Theirs is nothing
I can do anymore
To change who I am
Or to alter how I feel,
To disguise my face
Or conceal my tears.

I’ve only lived
To write a few poems
And to walk the streets
That witnessed our love.

When these limited days
Have vanished
Like a waking dream,
My sad voice
Will still be heard.

I hope you listen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

even if she doesn't, others have and will.....it is not for naught......

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

sad fact penned with beautiful imageries! truely you capturing beayty and truth as stated in biogra... 10+

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The lead in to the poem with the first stanza is stunning as the imagery of the leaf is captivating and you have written a lovely poem. 10 love Karin

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Milica Franchi De Luri 02 September 2009

i fill you frustration, trying to get someone to listen.........

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Sandra Fowler 02 September 2009

Very eloquent. Those autumn leaves will whisper about all the poets that have mattered in this world. They know your name.10/10 Kind wishes, Sandra

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