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I Just Want To Know

Rating: 4.4
Who am I?

Am I just a flesh of despair on a plate of hopefulness?

Or just a mortal being suspending and choking from a sordid rope of disbelief?

Who am I?

Am I just a tangible soul wrapped with some transient elements pulsating for the salvation?
Or just a puny little individual under the awaked sky awaiting the innocence to fall?
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Philip Winchester 17 February 2010
True to my words of last October...I am drawn to read again 'I just want to know' Well I am going to bet with you you know by now our dear Munia. From all the encouraging comments that you receive, that I am not a lone voice.
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your call! decide to be vertigonous at edge or immerse completely to an awakening san slumber! !
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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009
nice rational poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message....10++++++
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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009
nice rational poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message....10++++++
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Afzal Shauq 18 October 2009
good and inspiring question and its indirect explanations..reall a good piece.. you added here..yes you are you.. means a good writer and thoughful poet.. and maybe more then that..10/10
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009
I think this poem is intense and full of passion.
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Philip Winchester 08 October 2009
Who are you, ? Well let me tell you. You are everything I ever look for in a Poet. I shall take such pleasure in reading more of your work Again...and Again. I beg you read a couple of mine and tell me your Critic try ' Who in a Million Loves Me' and 'Remember You Are Special' and note them as My tribute to Your own Work.And Thank you for your comment on my Bridges. Kind regards. Philip
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Akram Awadat 07 October 2009
you are a good poet 10++
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John Thomas 06 October 2009
An excellent poem in which the writer opens herself to the World with her frustrations and anguish fully laid out raw and bare, and yet whilst in this tormented state still reprimands herself for feelings of selfishness in her quest for the truth. This is a brave and honest piece which tells much of the writer. The ability to create such a connection with the reader deserves a 10.
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Ravi Sathasivam 05 October 2009
Who am I? Good question to ask... But the answers lies within you in your deep thoughts. Beautiful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it
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