The smell of silky skin
And pale pink petals of roses
Smashed me down
In the world of loneliness again!
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So sad, I can feel your pain and loneliness, with beautiful lines!
Touching poem Sir. Heartfelt. Sadness flowing all through out this poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
oh how sad and full of deep emotions wonderfully done sir bravo
Beautiful poem! The smell of silky skin And pale pink petals of roses Smashed me down In the world of loneliness again! What a powerful combination of senses mingling to create extremely vivid images.
How sad! Has someone dear deserted you or gone off to some far off place? Each one of us is alone in this world most of the time... That's life! Thank you for your comment on my 300th poem!