Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Liked Her - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

With "yes" and "no" discussion
There prevailed total confusion
She will ask me for more assurance
As if limited stock was to be sold out at once

It used to be sweet tussle
Even for sharing fruit like apple
Some times for cold drink
And sometimes for different thinking

But I liked her nature
As I knew she was inclined for me and very sure
She will never think of leaving me behind
As her behavior proved to be very tough but kind

She was with me by chance
I had seen her only once
She presented a friendly gesture
That influenced me very much for her

I considered myself lucky person on earth
We had pledged to remain together till the death
Such was bond slowly developing
I was kneed deep in love and eloping

She will come from behind and put hands
On my eyes and ask for foes or friends
She will not utter for a single word
Only I have judge it by instinct standard

She is by any standard garden flower
Such luck may be had only by lucky fewer
I knew from her movement that she was to be mine
She held all the qualities and best as feminine

As luck was to prove it
She was tall in stature and above my height
I was looking small when compared
She was really a special gift from god and really spared


Comments about I Liked Her by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2012 11:07:00 PM)


    ripusinha sinha
    nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2012 6:45:00 AM)


    With “yes” and “no” discussion
    There prevailed total confusion
    She will ask me for more assurance
    As if limited stock was to be sold out at once
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012



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