I Live? Poem by Francis Tikava

I Live?

Rating: 5.0


I live,
In a fantasy,
Surrounded by pigs,
Entranced in sloth,
Eating mush and longing for figs,
Mechanically fattening,
For the farmer’s broth.
I am a pig,
I am a pig,
I am a pig.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ekaterina M. Polischuk 11 February 2012

hello, well when I`ve read this poem I thought what a strange poem... I did it twice and understood that it`s not just a poem. it`s a massage... Massage to all people... this information should make us to think about our way of life...and it does. It`s a really good and useful poem.

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Wahab Abdul 11 February 2012

nice poem with some hidden meaning, the poem is the result of doodling.

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Sara Tehrani 03 February 2012

The imagery here is really powerful with a strong sense emotive passion you have put into this. Quite an original idea too, im intrigued to know how your refering to fantasy here. Good read

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Dave Walker 31 January 2012

A great poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Evil Rising.

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