Kylee Bartz

Rookie - 12 Points (9-12-96 (September 12,1996) / Attica, New York)

I'Ll Wait - Poem by Kylee Bartz

I'll wait. And wait. And wait.
I'll wait for him to come.
I'll wait for him to save me.

My Romeo.
My Edward Cullen.
My knight in shining armor.

I've been waiting for a while now.
I'll wait a while more.
I'll wait until my hero comes to save me.

As I wait, I lose faith.
My hopes are dying every second.
Like a flower, they die so quickly.

I'll wait a little longer.
I'll wait just one more night.
I'll wait just one more night.

Comments about I'Ll Wait by Kylee Bartz

  • (6/1/2010 9:01:00 AM)

    awesome...a sweet poem with rich idea..well done (Report) Reply

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  • (5/12/2010 9:32:00 AM)

    beautifullll! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 5:27:00 PM)

    Nice, but I could have done without the 'Edward Cullen, ' but you're a teenybopper, so I can't rag on you too much. I wrote something similar to this called Where Is She? Check it out when you get a chance. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 8:27:00 AM)

    im not waiting. heh, i made the whole thing up as if i was. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 8:22:00 AM)

    i must say you are very good! keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (5/11/2010 4:57:00 AM)

    perhaps your night is over. So don't waste time by waiting further, rather try to acquire strength to save other at least weak fellows as your associates. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 3:57:00 AM)

    u are quite good hey - don't u think u should save some of your poetry - to really publish a book one day - reap the rewards.
    we don't really gate paid here.

    this is where we are recognised though - free advertisng lol
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 1, 2010

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