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I'Ll Wait No More

Rating: 4.9
You came with all the splendor of the rising sun,
With the symphony of Mozart in your eyes,
You came like a rain in a dusty summer
And when you spoke, everything went still.

With royal grace you moved about, unknowing
The havoc you caused my mind
I was struck like a thunderbolt… smitten,
Bewitched, and bewildered, my heart lay fallen
How long in silence will I remain imprisoned?
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Willis Martyn 19 July 2008
The metaphor in the opening stanza is powerful and imaginative, 'The symphony of mozart in your eyes' Wow!
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Lee Degnan 27 November 2007
Such a dare, isn't it? A 'damned if you do, damned if you don't' situation... I'd say a thing or two if I had such nerve, but I don't, so I won't! ! And the fear of rejection... yeah, that's the other half of it! ! Hey, maybe we 'should' leave it up to the 'man'? lol Please... if I have to wait for a man again, I'd never get anywhere. Typically we'd have to spell it out to them anyway! Love how you get me thinkin' girl lol Hugs, Lee
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 12 August 2007
Jemarie - Love is the strongest force on earth, and most unpredictable. Read my 'It's Just Blood' and see if you agree. great write - Cheryl
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Marvin Brato 28 May 2007
A woman is still a woman by the standard of man.No matter what she has achieved or status in life, she has to be submissive to the love of his man not for another.If she goes beyond the fence, she will be judged accordingly. She can love the man of her heart but wait for the man to express his love for her, in this way she will have nothing to regret! . Worth 10 for me.
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Kate Kate 21 May 2007
I really love this one. Like really concider in the first line you used one of my words and used it quite well. Plus in the second stanze the first line also had anotehr favorite word. I truly love this its shows the strength within those who often feel weak.
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