Teedy Dawn

Rookie - 10 Points (Sheffield, Yorkshire, England)

I Love Him - Poem by Teedy Dawn

At night when it's still,
And I watch him breathe,
I realise how much I love him,
And why I'll never leave.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


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  • (3/16/2006 11:16:00 AM)

    Very simple and very well said. Its amazing how when whilst someone is sleepingl, you can fall in love with them without even speaking a word to them (Report)Reply

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  • (3/16/2006 9:59:00 AM)

    Very loving. Best of luck and love to you

    Patricia
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  • (3/16/2006 9:16:00 AM)

    yes
    the mystery of breath
    that slight movement of the chest
    revealing
    all happiness
    safety
    wonder wisdom
    here so beautifull expressed
    a fine poem
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 23, 2014


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