Randhir kaur

Gold Star - 9,836 Points (9/2/1997 / Assam, jorhat)

I Love My Life... - Poem by Randhir kaur

I realized, Oh, there\'s
something to be shared
with, Always who
made the capacity to
lift my moods out of
gloom and despair... I
realized, Oh, The Days
and Nights seems to be
equally brighter now,
Always who has enliven
and inspired me even in
the most pensive and
melancholy moments...
They realized, Oh, Now
Randhir is not like quite
before, They
realized, Oh, Now Randhir
\'s smile is quite wide
than before, They
realized, Oh, The real
magic of Love can only
happen to change her,
They realized, Oh, This
would be fair to say
that she found the only
feel of LOVE, But Wrong
are the Intentions of
the people & sayings of
the legends, that, \'Love
makes life\'... I
say, that, Is Love
everything in Life? ? .? I
argue, that, Does Loves
brings to you infinite
prosperity or support? .?
I have realized, Oh, LOVE
makes all things
beautiful, But, LIFE is the
biggest
Teacher, Experience and
Happiness itself... I
found everything in my
Life and thats what
makes me realize today
to say that, \'I love my
life\'...

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

First love ur life, then love others.

Comments about I Love My Life... by Randhir kaur

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/26/2018 3:16:00 AM)

    Part-2
    LOVE
    makes all things
    beautiful, But, LIFE is the
    biggest
    Teacher, Experience and
    Happiness itself... I
    found everything in my
    Life and thats what
    makes me realize today
    to say that, \'I love my
    life\'...

    It is a beautiful philosophical poem nicely executed.10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/26/2018 3:15:00 AM)

    Part- 1
    We must love our lives first. Love makes all things beautiful. It keeps away the agony and hatred. Who doesn't love his life he commits suicide and becomes the vitim of great sin. If we shalln't love ourselves we can't love others. Dear Randhir, you have so astutely and startlingly inscribed this poem. Your experience is right. I cite......
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  • Poet Poet (9/18/2017 8:02:00 PM)

    yes this is poetry
    And you must thank every one
    who has commented otherwise
    'tis a mark of disrespect no one will read you again
    for a second time mark time


    I have composed over 15900 poems...but my master poet tells me...its not quantity.. but quality..then i asked him fools read me... over 2000 daily... let me be... Then he said okay be a 'POETree''' bear fruits of all kinds more sweet.. bitter few... i shall not interview nor interfere with you...post all rubbish too.. who am i to control you none can control vomit...but then I said some flies and fleas...survive on vomit too... you want me to starve them O MASTER TELL ME WILL YOU...HE became silent... then vamoosed he had fused diffused and now lies in refuse
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  • Siddartha Montik (7/31/2017 4:40:00 AM)

    The Title itself is Beautiful in deep and in Essence! No Qualms of lines! ! 1`000++ (Report)Reply

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  • Roshana Phillips (4/28/2017 7:05:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Indeed love should be our first priority; none else and that's loving for everyone and thing. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (4/27/2017 3:11:00 PM)

    Yes, excellent poem, we should love our life and develop it for our qwn benefit, thank you for sharing,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvaonyema Uba (1/10/2017 12:08:00 PM)

    Charity begins at home.
    You can give what you don't have.
    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

    Sylva-Onyema Uba
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  • Mohit Katyal (12/31/2016 10:09:00 AM)

    Very nicely written...its just awesome (Report)Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur (12/19/2016 12:38:00 AM)

    Montik Sir my Greetings from India. I am so impressed by your kind feedback. Well, how? I don't know..its something you need to feel what life has to offer. We hardly cherish tiny things. Those little things made me feel the biggest man and a lover of life. Life loves the liver of it. And thus enjoying it. Thanks much for your question. Please stay connected. With respect. (Report)Reply

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  • Siddartha Montik (12/16/2016 8:31:00 AM)

    and let them know..loved every line of Staunch strength from with in! ! Thank you for sharing! ..and how? (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (12/3/2016 10:47:00 AM)

    Nicely composed feelings. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur (9/27/2016 1:55:00 AM)

    Deep thank you to Gary, Chettiar and Mehta Sir for your kind words. I am honoured by such praises. Love. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/24/2016 9:30:00 PM)

    so nice.. good wordings...10

    Patience in

    Oh lovely female too
    And very true
    Lover for love and liking
    That is most striking

    “Life is teacher”
    As you puts with views stronger
    It is better
    We learn it sooner

    • Randhir….. name
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    Randhir Kaur(9/27/2016 1:52:00 AM)

    I am overwhelmed by your kind words dear Sir. Thank you so much. Your every word means a lot to me. Today I am feeling that I have influenced at least one by my simple write. I am honoured. Wishes.

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (8/28/2016 9:50:00 AM)

    passion of the youth poring to the delight (Report)Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 7:15:00 AM)

    Oh I am so damn glad to hear that Luo.. Thanks for reading. (Report)Reply

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  • Luo Zhihai (6/13/2016 4:57:00 AM)

    I love my life.
    It voiced my mind.
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  • Randhir Kaur (6/7/2016 7:56:00 AM)

    That's so nice of you to read my poem Sir..Thank you for your appreciation. (Report)Reply

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  • Niaz Uddin Sumon (6/6/2016 11:43:00 PM)

    LIFE is the
    biggest
    Teacher, Experience and
    Happiness....
    I'm agree with u.... nice poem
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  • Randhir Kaur (6/6/2016 4:13:00 AM)

    That's very nice to give a beautiful quotation. Many thanks C.P Sharma for your kind review. (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (6/6/2016 3:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful feelings have been very well penned. Randhir, Life is a beautiful cage with all its charms and allurements in which the love birds live. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 28, 2015



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