I love You
coz not I wanted
a kid from you
for my legacy
bright and beautiful.
I love you
coz not,
you promised me
to be mine
all births to come.
I love you
coz not
you are with me
even when in my stand
I am wrong.
I love you
coz not
you are nice to look at,
sweet you speak
coz not
You served me with
all delicacy
brought up my kids
supported me
when I was ill
and bankrupt,
I love you
coz not you consoled
me at hard times
wiped my eyes
when with tears.
coz not,
you cared my ailing parrents
and valued my love.
I love you
coz not,
you are commited
so much to
me alone.
I love you
coz
I love you
you love me or not.
when in my utter solitude
you are my words and deeds
in loneliest midnight
in the darkness,
I talked to me
You talked to me.
I love you
you love me or not.
when in my utter solitude you are my words and deeds in loneliest midnight in the darkness, I talked to me You talked to me. I love you you love me or not. The final stanza is the ice ing of the cake.....liked it very much.. like ur simplicity in words and expressions...........got a feeling all ur thoughts come deep from ur heart.. thank u dear poet.. tony
Thanks dear sir for your lovely comments.I dont control my emotion to read your comments.you have deeped in to my feelings.I loved it.I cordially request you to read and comment upon my poems A poem for my lovely daughter.Regards sir. Binaya
Love so divine, so honest, rare, amazing. Loved the lines... you are my words and deeds in loneliest midnight in the darkness, I talked to me You talked to me. I love you you love me or not. 10++++ for it.
Nice appreciation for the poem. I loved it. Please read my poem Death me shocked at.
when in my utter solitude you are my words and deeds in loneliest midnight Lovely lines sir, a nicely penned poem. Enjoyed reding it. 10+++ for it.
Thanks for lovely comments dear Rinni.plz read and comment on my new poem love unseen in adistant land if you like.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very beautiful poem coz you so often repeated coz nice work will read each other more each poet is unique u and i equally