Friday, November 27, 2015

I Love You As A Whole Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweetheart!
Why do you love only your continent,
why do live only for your nation,
why do you sing only for your culture,
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Khalid Saifullah 28 November 2015

A great message in a romantic style.........................

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2015

Thought provoking poem, We love material things, we love to satisfy our biological needs and we love to gain something from it yet we forget in this world one should love only for the sake of Almighty since everything belongs to Him and one day it will go back/ return to Him. Nicely written poem Janab....

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Shakil Ahmed 27 November 2015

well penned poem, the ending is very beautiful- no continent, no nation, no culture, no religion, just a land where there is nothing other than love! thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2015

Having love for nation and world is definitely fantastic with expression. Religions, colors and castes are not the bar for expressive love. A thoughtful and well visioned poem drafted and shared definitely. Wise and interesting...10

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