I Loved You!

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I loved the entire hive
but i could buy honey from shops
you thought i prefered the latter

I needed the beautiful bunch of flowers to fill my nose but i could buy fragrance
in that cosmetic store

I loved the springs and the fountains
the streams below the mountains
but i could buy water in the bottle

I needed the mangos, the grapes, the oranges the whole forest
but i could get them in the supermarkets and groceries

I needed the entire heartdom
the romance, the passion, the complement

but you still thought i loved limbs-apartdom!
The unfulfilling enjoyment, the lust
the fornication

now you made limps part many days

and my money part one day!

you flew away

i didnt like the latter

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Sai R 29 December 2012

good poetic flow...i liked it a lot

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Asif Andalib 26 November 2012

Nice poem. Thanks for sharing

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Eindaray Kyaw 03 October 2012

Really nice idea in composing your story...I appreciate the steps you mentioned.and examples Great! !

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