Thursday, March 13, 2014

I Loved You More Than I Should Have Had Comments

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I loved you more than I should have had;
I could no longer hold my ardent love inside;
A such passion needed to be imparted; and sad,
Too late to realise it was all in vain because your pride;
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2018

A poignant love poem! Touching expression: Through you I felt the girl, and I felt the woman/In timid glimmer first sensing her femininity/Euphorically beguiled by you — by you, My Man! I admire you style of penning! (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

Love and pain! My heart in fear had frozen. Thanks for sharing.

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