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I'M Alone

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Im alone in the dark,
I don't see a clue or a mark,
It seems like this place is haunted,
And it also feels like whoever comes here is exempted,
I waited for you all alone,
Thinkin' that you'll come without a frown,
For all those times I've waited,
And today also, for a long time I've waited,
Still, I see no sign of you,
But, I can't betray you,

No matter how worse it gets,
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

Nice poem… ‘eerie’ a very good coinage for the poetic situation… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems [Why Hack My She ~ in Elite 500] with comments and…. niv

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Erica Johnson 24 November 2009

good poem... keep it up

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Well written poem..........

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Joseph Poewhit 24 November 2009

Captures a feeling of hope. There is always tomorrow

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