Chocolate Cake Poem by Sherbanu Molu

Chocolate Cake

Rating: 5.0


Chocolate cake,
Peacefully baked,
Chocolate dripping down from the cake,
Oh! My life at stake,
Some flakes sprinkled on the top,
When the knife went chop chop,
A big cherry placed on the centre,
Red in color,
Cream everywhere,
Something you can never compare,
Freshly baked chocolate cake,
Is sold without a brake,
Early in the morning,
Business is boosting,
When chocolate cake,
Is peacefully baked...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 30 December 2009

Sounds yummy to me... the poem taste fine thank you

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Omar Ibrahim 29 December 2009

peacefully is strange for a cake being baked you may want to change it with another adverb...but it's a wonderful poem made me hungry though i have just finished eating! i found the rhyme musical here...great job keep writing and give me a piece of your cake!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 December 2009

Yummy Yummy…wow...you’ll enjoy alone? 1st bite for me dear…LOL! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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