I'm going under, Comments

this is a reallllly good poem. although its a dark poem, its so good and really well written. and loadss of people, i think, including me sometimes, go through that place :)

i've been there. and clawing ur way to the surface may never seem worth it, but when you breath again and can see again..... u know that ur pain wuz not in vain. dark.... not bad. lolz.

Remind me the title of evanescence song, this one is dark.and u look good in dark, but we not vampire lol (hhahahaha) so sometimes maybe u can wash ur soul with light..it pure some impurities..it will make u a new direction of poem..i love to live in dark but i love to bathe with light too... good piece..keep writing talented friend