I'M Gonna Be Poem by javonta RussellWhite

I'M Gonna Be

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i've recently learned about the law of attraction.. i now see that life is not all about my actions neither reactions.. my life wasn't destined when my mother was having contractions.. i love music and not just rapping.. i could make plans after plans and they could fail just as rapid.. so i no longer make plans i just live life and imagine tomorrow like i'm psychic.. i constantly tell myself what i'm gonna be.. instead of letting myy journey be written for me.. i imagine a long healthy life with wealth gain by patients.. i'm gonna be.! i'm gonna be.! ! i'm gonna be.! ! ! healthy & wealthy. i image i'm gonna be..
A.K.A The Warrior Of Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 15 July 2015

It's so nice when you see people planning for the future, trying to think about it, living it. Most of the people nowadays only think about the current moment they live, noting more, nothing less. Wish you to get what you want, happy healthy and wealthy. I suggest to edit you poem to make in a poetic style, like: i've recently learned about the law of attraction.. i now see that life is not all about my actions neither reactions.. my life wasn't destined when my mother was having contractions.. .................. Thank you for sharing..

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Allotey Abossey 15 July 2015

You write very well but it's also not a bad thing to plan. For it is written: which king shall go out to battle and doesn't first consider or calculate strength, and if he realises that he can't defeat the other, he straight away goes to make peace. Great write my friend

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 15 July 2015

A nice prose poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'The Empress Of My Heart'

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