Tuesday, August 4, 2015

I'M Not Angry, I'M Hurt Comments

Rating: ★4.2

A small town, a teenage girl,
Crazy for her passions,
Wondering & pondering of beautiful mansions.
The same town, a teenage boy,
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Viren Shah
broken farewell
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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2015

Lovely narrative poem depicting abrupt end to bliss of love occasioned by careless error of omission. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Viren. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Viren Shah 15 August 2015

Thanks chinedu! Will surely read the poem :)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 08 August 2015

Oh dear! beautiful and sad too. True love will find a way back and hope we get to read the next positive part too.

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Viren Shah 08 August 2015

Tysm roop rekha! even I hope she comes back so that I can make a positive one :)

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Viren Shah 08 August 2015

Even I wait for good! Thank you :)

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Kelly Kurt 05 August 2015

Most people have had this experience. One you wrote about so well Thank you, Viren Peace

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Viren Shah 05 August 2015

Thank you Kelly! ! Nice to hear that :)

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Soul Watcher 05 August 2015

So sad, thank you for sharing

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Viren Shah 05 August 2015

Thank you soul :)

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Allotey Abossey 05 August 2015

Good organisation and excellent diction. God bless you for sharing friend. Stay blessed

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Viren Shah 05 August 2015

:) :) thank u allotey

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Gajanan Mishra 04 August 2015

very very beautiful, really one should move cautiously..

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Viren Shah 04 August 2015

Thank you!

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