I'm Not Happy Poem by Meshack Sewe

I'm Not Happy

Rating: 5.0


My heart was a vessel
Hungry for a morsel
My soul was cold
As dreams of the old
My cries were null
As tears of a water-fall…..
Then all was history
Your love my story
…But now I'm unhappy…
Because you're away…..

On that May,
On that day,
Amidst blink-less eyes,
Witnessing our love-lit fires
Our fingers were lifted
Blessed rings fitted
Sweet vows exchanged
No longer engaged…
Our union was merry
…..But now I'm unhappy…
Because you are away…

Last time you came….
My happiness I couldn't name!
Our boy on your arm
Your smile was charm
We kissed and hugged
Sad moments were mugged!
Your presence, sweet flowers!
Our laughers, hot showers!
……But now I'm unhappy…
……Because you are away…

What is it in the heart that great minds cannot read?
What is it in the minds that great hearts cannot heed?
My soul coldly burns thy memories closer
I reach for my phone with the zeal of a grocer
Your voice so real …touches me to the bone
The background so a live my pains all gone
But the line goes dead….. All time is spent
I lie on bed, sadly coiled like a serpent
Another time has come… for my long lonely night
YES, I'M UNHAPPY…
…..BECAUSE YOU ARE AWAY

Friday, June 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

O GOSHHH, the serpent laments his unhappiness through a venom coated piece.Lovely piece Meshack!

1 1 Reply
Claire Hastie 16 June 2009

I really like this poem, it is very heartfelt. It makes me think more. Is your love away for a short while? A holiday perhaps, or is it for a life time? I may never know.

1 1 Reply

i loooove this, .. i feel you, every word you've written is very straight to the point..clearly came from the heart..you should write more.. :) thanks for sharing..10++

1 0 Reply
Lynda Robson 10 June 2009

Good flow to this poem, feeling sad because you are away from your love, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

1 0 Reply
Winnie Angel 05 June 2009

...away away fom ur beloved! ..beautiful ur lines shows how much you...trully appreciable....

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success