Maya Hershey

I'M Sorry ♫ ♫

If it makes you feel better,
I wrote you this song..
I know It's gunna take forever,
to apologize, I'm wrong..

But in your love I have fell,
yet, it's me who's pushing away..
things I didn't mean to tell,
But God, it feels I have to say..

* * * * * *

I'm sorry..
For all the things I say,
to make you feel this way.

and I'm sorry..
'cuz when we're close to have it all,
I mess it up, and then we fall..

So I'm sorry...

* * * * * *

You might be laughing,
when you reach this part..
But I wanna say something,
before we fall apart..

If I tell you I hate you,
that'll be the biggest lie,
and If I say I'm not so into you,
that'll be me loosing my freekin mind...

* * * * * *

But I'm sorry..
for all the pain I caused,
and if you feel the way is closed.

and I'm sorry..
for telling you this word!
God! .. I'm so absurd!

So I'm sorry...

* * * * * *

So now I reach this part of my song,
when I tell you... Sorry, I was wrong,
and sweety... I'm lame,
and Baby... I'm insane,
Yes insane... But in you!
Yes laugh... But it's true!
Now let's stop this nonsense and chat,
not give it up just like that,
I want us to be forever,
like two love birds together...

* * * * * *

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009

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Comments about I'M Sorry ♫ ♫ by Maya Hershey

  • The Gladiator (9/11/2009 2:02:00 PM)

    i think he should accept ur apology coz its sensere this is a lovely pioem full of emotions.your friend Ward.
    Ramadan Kareem

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  • Deva De Silva (6/23/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    I was already singing it in my head through out...

    Deva

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  • Afzal Shauq (6/23/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    So now I reach this part of my song,
    when I tell you... Sorry, I was wrong,
    and sweety... I'm lame,
    and Baby... I'm insane,
    Yes insane... But in you!
    Yes laugh... But it's true!
    Now let's stop this nonsense and chat,
    not give it up just like that,
    I want us to be forever,
    like two love birds together...
    wht free frank and charming way of this poem written.. idea is heartfeeling one... good expression, meaningful enough and melodious one too.. i really liked it and appreciate your poetry making style...10+++++++++

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (6/18/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    A 'sorry sorry' bird...talking poem, Maya...talking frank sincere and loving...thanks...10

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  • Surya . (6/18/2009 6:15:00 AM)

    vow beautifull thoughts in love and very neatly expressed. i felt your pain
    voted 10 for u
    surya

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