I Miss Him Poem by Nabilaima Ima

I Miss Him

Rating: 5.0


I'm looked into your eyes when you told me you going to leave me
my hearts cry for a thousands time
but I keep in silent
I asked why
you said you want to get married
I looked at you and my tears can't stop falling
then I asked again why you betray me
he said it's god decide...
Then I left him without looking back
my heart screaming and crying
I heard he still calling me for sorry
but I can't accepted it

Days passing by
I live alone in a broken heart
leaving the sweet memories that play in mind
leaving him forever for his joy
I keep on my life for good
working hard to forget the past
until I can stand up again with new hope

But one day I met him again accidentally
I try to run away
but he asked me to stay a while
so we talk a while and I'm feel uneasy to see him
we talk as a friend about life and career
but suddenly I was shocked when he ask me why I'm still alone
I keep silent
my heart beat running fast
I'm speechless
he look at my eyes and keep on asking
I said to him forget about the pass thinks about our future
then I leave him
I know he try to seduce me
but I can't make it
although my heart say
I'm still miss him



Created by Nabila

I Miss Him
Thursday, October 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A story of a girl who leave his boyfriend after she found her lover married her best friend but she still missing him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitabho Sengupta 22 October 2015

Hi Nabilaima Ima, kindly use proper punctuation and capital letters, and edit and republish the piece following some minimal grammatical issues. I would forward my further comments afterwards.God bless you, dear.

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Imanabila Nabila 23 October 2015

Hiii thanks for the comments. I m new here and please teach me coz I love poems

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharings Nabilaima.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Nabilaima Ima. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Imanabila Nabila 23 October 2015

thanks a lot for the comments. I m new here and I respect all your comments.

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Fabrizio Frosini 22 October 2015

''A story of a girl who leave his boyfriend after she found her lover married her best friend but she still missing him.'' so many are unhappy because of an unrequited love.. and they experience sadness and dismay.. but looking at the future - as you say in your poem - is the only way to go through it cheers

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Kelly Kurt 22 October 2015

A heart touching piece, Nabilaima. Thanks

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