I Miss You Poem by JR Cuyam

I Miss You

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Everything that looked hale
Is now very bad and unwell

The sun shows no energy
Couldn't send out rays just like me

The stars are no longer exuberant
The trees, I no longer hear their chant

The moon is no longer lucent
Pale now the sky which once was resplendent

All the colors quickly turned to grey
Those lovely flowers, nowlook dirty

That's how contagious I am, see i'm very sick
I don't want to die in this illness so come back now, be quick

Restore our health we need an antidote
And it's your presence Buds, I know this isn't cute

Friday, April 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,missing,sick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 02 April 2016

Love is like sun that illuminates our heart, uplift our spirit and give energy to body.When love withdraws it plunges us to darkness, sapping our energy and dwindling our spirit.A deep yearning and a call to the love to come back to life is nicely penned in this beautiful poem.Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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Sonali Ganguly 01 April 2016

beautifully pen pictured the thoughts

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 April 2016

Nice about the relationships in the best way. Thank you Jr.Cuyam for this wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 April 2016

Restore our health we need an antidote And it's your presence Buds, I know this isn't cute...... i miss you very much. this idea u have developed in a wonderful poetic imaginative way. love this poem very much my dear poet. tony

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