I Need Your Love Comments

ahhh Uriah.. what I can say.. apart from when the right person comes she will put you into her heart that is not a mere house. her heart will be a palace :) Take care HBH

oh my goodness Uriah, I dunno what to say..do you know how powerful this is?

This poem oozes longing and loneliness. You have done it well with your rewriting. The line 'my heart is a dark, friendless street' says it all. Your writing gets better, Uriah. Raynette

Uncliched honesty about the heart is hard to find around here. This is the real stuff.

as a human being that a woman would touch... exquisite. salut.

We love you Uriah, we can't do without your lovely comments and the feeling you give us of such a caring heart. We need you. Love Ernestine XXX

Uriah, Whether you know it or not.......you've already been brought into my home. You and your wonderfully tender heart are embedded in my soul. You have that affect on people through your words...that is truly a gift. Your friend, Mary

Such a touching poem Uriah.....you break my heart you know :)

This is a very sweet poem, Uriah.