Friday, October 24, 2014

I Never Travelled Alone Comments

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I never travelled alone,
Wherever I went,
I was always chased,
By a shadow,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Amitava Sur 30 October 2014

A beautiful penning on intense love and liking, being exposed in those lines as...... I am an eve with the writ, I am half of you. ..... so heart touching ! ! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 26 October 2014

I protected your heart and all it's slaves I am the eve with the writ I am half of you. And so it is the shadow excellent writing

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... I merged your shadow in that of mine, Your brain is yours and the rest is mine, I protected your heart and all its slaves, I am an eve with the writ, I am half of you. Beautiful way of describing Better Half! ! ! If we see spiritually, there are both male and female power in every human beings. You have described beautifully and I loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 26 October 2014

I merged your shadow in that of mine, Your brain is yours and the rest is mine, I protected your heart and all its slaves, ....love that leave a shadow behind.....great work sir

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Ramesh Rai 25 October 2014

I am half of you. In our philosophy she is said Ardhangani half of the body. Love your soulful write.

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Valsa George 25 October 2014

How fortunate you are to be a chased by a loving and protective shadow! Not many are blessed that way! Enjoyed this whimsical write!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 October 2014

Very good poem, dreamy, magical. Thanks for sharing.

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