I Once Was Poem by Chris Clingman

I Once Was

Rating: 5.0


I once was a kid
but now i am a teen
i used to love to laugh
and now i hardly smile

i once was a fighter
but now i am a lover
i will turn away a fight
unless you attack my heart

i once was a pup
but now i am a wolf
as i work to build my mind
i also work to build my strength

i once was a firey blaze
but now i am a cooling ember
i used to burn with hate
but now i burn with love

i once was an artist
but now i am a poet
i used to draw how i felt
but now i write how i feel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara- rae 24 May 2009

you know if i didnt have to write 20 words for this comment to go through, i would only write one beautiful.

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RAWR HARDCORE 13 May 2009

pretty chill i must say that u are a true poet

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Danielle Ward 13 May 2009

Love this poem, especially the last two lines! :)

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*I'm not broken. * 12 May 2009

wow, this is amazing. i love your creative style of writing. keep writing, you rock at it.

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Wilma Horne 11 May 2009

Really good. It really shows how you are changing from being 'hard' to something moldable and loving.10++

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2014

good changes with time. keep it up

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Hazel Durham 17 April 2013

We all change hopefully for the better, life teaches us so much! Great rhythm and flow, Excellent write!

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Alex Medina 16 June 2012

Great show of your transformation. I can relate with basically all of it. I especially liked the last stanza.

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Amber Glistener 12 April 2012

We should never burn with rage but always with love, for that is what the great Lord has given us. I can also relate to this poem and you take my breath away with your works. Keep on going...

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Seairra Kyger 17 June 2009

aww that was super cute i like i like its wierd how even tho were so young we can still see changes in ourself

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