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I Owe It To You! ! !

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I n’vr thought I could write
Untill the day you showed me light

You don’t know what you mean to me
All I can say is you live in me

If you’re hurt, I get the pain
If you’re happy, I’m the one who smile

Be with me till my death
For if you’re gone it’ll be my end
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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 October 2007
as love unified.....beautiful expression of love ingenuous, i like the poem, well penned yet
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Raghavan Warrier 09 January 2007
In many poems I find a universal truth forcibly added to make the poem attractive. But to you they come naturally through the sincerity of your passion. The line 'Untill the day you showed me light' is another example. The role of lover as the other's torch bearer, friend, guide and philosopher is beautifully expressed.
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Geoff Warden 29 December 2006
Must agree with Giblin, these to lines are well executed and deliver the truth of love well done
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Jibin Joseph 29 December 2006
If you’re hurt, I get the pain If you’re happy, I’m the one who smile true love captured in just 2 line great work love kuttus
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