Tara Acharya

Rookie - 25 Points (June 30,1981 / India)

I Owe It To You! ! ! - Poem by Tara Acharya

I n’vr thought I could write
Untill the day you showed me light

You don’t know what you mean to me
All I can say is you live in me

If you’re hurt, I get the pain
If you’re happy, I’m the one who smile

Be with me till my death
For if you’re gone it’ll be my end


Comments about I Owe It To You! ! ! by Tara Acharya

  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/13/2007 2:43:00 PM)

    as love unified.....beautiful expression of love ingenuous, i like the poem, well penned yet (Report)Reply

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  • Raghavan Warrier (1/9/2007 1:41:00 PM)

    In many poems I find a universal truth forcibly added to make the poem attractive. But to you they come naturally through the sincerity of your passion. The line
    'Untill the day you showed me light'
    is another example. The role of lover as the other's torch bearer, friend, guide and philosopher is beautifully expressed.
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  • Geoff Warden (12/29/2006 8:42:00 AM)

    Must agree with Giblin, these to lines are well executed and deliver the truth of love
    well done
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  • Jibin JosephJibin Joseph (12/29/2006 2:24:00 AM)

    If you’re hurt, I get the pain
    If you’re happy, I’m the one who smile
    true love captured in just 2 line
    great work
    love kuttus
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, December 17, 2010


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