You Made Me Feel Poem by Tara Acharya

You Made Me Feel

Rating: 4.9


You made me laugh,
You made me cry.
The look in your eyes,
Made me shy.

The words you whispered
in my ear
Those sweet nothings
I yearn to hear.

The way you made me
Feel in the drizzle.
The touch so gentle
It makes me crumble.

I still want to
Feel that warmth.
As you held me,
Close to your heart.

Today you are gone,
And will never reply.
But the you in me,
Will never die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashish R 19 December 2006

Some people will always be special throughout our lives even if they are not with us.Nice poem.Welcome to PH. Ashish.

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Jibin Joseph 19 December 2006

i am short of words to comment on such deep emotions, there are moments cherished by the poet and a deep lost feeling to get back the treasure.......great work............................

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Mary Jinu 21 December 2006

Touching poem, a good work indeed

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Raghavan Warrier 27 December 2006

'Today you are gone, And will never reply. But the you in me, Will never die. ' Touches upon the essence of love. Every love demands a transformation, a sacrifice, travel through a path of no return. So beautifully expressed in simple four lines.

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Geoff Warden 28 December 2006

A well versed poem depicting the want of need......Great writes and please add more unto the pages of PH...........

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A long sigh after readin this! Its a beautiful poem. Ur poems are wonderful.

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premji premji 30 May 2009

hurted by love....ah! poetry....

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Pradnya P 03 March 2007

It sadden u But true feelings, really awesome, u hve expressed them very emotionally n beautifully

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Jerry Hughes 03 February 2007

...what a lovely confession of young love, so sweet

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jim hogg 28 January 2007

Tender sentiments, ultimately sad, very eloquently expressed.

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