Tara Acharya

Rookie - 25 Points (June 30,1981 / India)

You Made Me Feel - Poem by Tara Acharya

You made me laugh,
You made me cry.
The look in your eyes,
Made me shy.

The words you whispered
in my ear
Those sweet nothings
I yearn to hear.

The way you made me
Feel in the drizzle.
The touch so gentle
It makes me crumble.

I still want to
Feel that warmth.
As you held me,
Close to your heart.

Today you are gone,
And will never reply.
But the you in me,
Will never die.


Comments about You Made Me Feel by Tara Acharya

  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A LieThe Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/22/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    A long sigh after readin this!
    Its a beautiful poem.
    Ur poems are wonderful.
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  • premji premjipremji premji (5/30/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    hurted by love....ah! poetry.... (Report)Reply

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  • Pradnya P (3/3/2007 9:39:00 AM)

    It sadden u
    But true feelings,
    really awesome, u hve expressed them very emotionally n beautifully
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  • Jerry Hughes (2/3/2007 12:43:00 AM)

    ...what a lovely confession of young love, so sweet (Report)Reply

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  • jim hogg (1/28/2007 10:58:00 AM)

    Tender sentiments, ultimately sad, very eloquently expressed. (Report)Reply

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  • Geoff Warden (12/28/2006 8:34:00 AM)

    A well versed poem depicting the want of need......Great writes and please add
    more unto the pages of PH...........
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  • Raghavan Warrier (12/27/2006 11:23:00 AM)

    'Today you are gone,
    And will never reply.
    But the you in me,
    Will never die. '
    Touches upon the essence of love. Every love demands a transformation, a sacrifice, travel through a path of no return. So beautifully expressed in simple four lines.
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  • Mary Jinu (12/21/2006 7:40:00 AM)

    Touching poem, a good work indeed (Report)Reply

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  • Jibin JosephJibin Joseph (12/19/2006 3:24:00 AM)

    i am short of words to comment on such deep emotions, there are moments cherished by the poet and a deep lost feeling to get back the treasure.......great work............................ (Report)Reply

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  • Ashish R (12/19/2006 2:59:00 AM)

    Some people will always be special throughout our lives even if they are not with us.Nice poem.Welcome to PH.
    Ashish.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 19, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 11, 2010


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