Saturday, April 18, 2015

I Pursue You Comments

Rating: 4.5

In my sleep I pursue you
In our traditional costume
A beautiful smile disappears
And recaptures again and again
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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2017

Sound so happy n happening... A festival sound vibrates in this poem

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Sekharan Pookkat 18 October 2017

Festivals bring us the feelings of oneness and the fragrance of flowers remands unity

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Bharati Nayak 07 May 2015

Welcoming spring with all its colour? Upon the arrival of spring, nature gears up to welcome him with festivities.; with song of birds and dance of flowers.- - - Loved the poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 October 2017

Nature welcome festivals of all seasons And ornaments them with flowers we enjoy them. thanks for your appreciation

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Kewayne Wadley 18 April 2015

Comfort in a lovers presence. I loved all of this especially the first and last lines. Keep that pen moving! Artfully done

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 October 2017

I welcome all festivals on all seasons

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