I Recall, My Love Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

I Recall, My Love

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And I recall it still at once
That silvery hoary moonlight,
When we met on that fateful night
And felt light could be such nuisance.
And helping us a bit nigh soon
The moon never regained full light
Hiding behind clouds at its noon,
But peeped out to watch our first fight,

And smiled when you prepared to leave,
My pleads, persuading proving vain,
Puzzling me what went wrong that eve,
Some riddles remain etched as pain.
If patient had we posed like moon,
Would our love have withered so soon?
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Sonnets | 04.08.14 |

Tuesday, March 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

Smiled! ! ! ! When you prepared to leave. Memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 August 2019

Thanks for your visit dear poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

Dear Poet, Bharati Nayak, Today once again when I wanted to visit some of your poems, I get the feedback 'The page is not found'. But I'll try again.

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Bharati Nayak 13 July 2019

The moon never regained full light Hiding behind clouds at its noon, But peeped out to watch our first fight, And smiled when you prepared to leave, My pleads, persuading proving vain, Puzzling me what went wrong that eve, Some riddles remain etched as pain. - - - - - - -A bitter-sweet memory that is still a riddle to you- -a fine poem, thanks for sharing..

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

Thank you indeed for the feedback and good words

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2015

A beautiful poem on love at first sight..........................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 July 2019

Thank you dear poet, i had missed this feedback earlier.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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