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I Saw You

Rating: 5.0
to the semblance of a thought


I saw you in the sunlight
So bright and amber lit
It touched my soul to soften
In ways it so thought fit
So tarried with the burden
Sequeled I ventured right
Alas! A harried thought to rule
It wounds my feel to fight
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Ken E Hall 12 August 2009
The beginning and the end make this poem unique and beautiful a pleasure to read which I thankyou for sharing++++++++++10 regards
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rago rago 26 April 2009
A deep thought and satisfying verses. The last lines make the whole poem meaningful.
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Kesav Easwaran 18 April 2009
good farewell poem, Arya...a lot of good will inside...and beautiful rhyming...thanks...10
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Subroto Chatterjee 09 April 2009
Ms. India, Congratulations. Hmmm....Deep thinking, keep drinking.....thoughts! Memories don't leave like people do....they always stay with you. Cheers. Subroto.
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