Sunday, March 13, 2011

I See You In Your Skinny Jeans Comments

Rating: 3.5

I see you in your skinny jeans,
Loosely-tied black boots,
And I know that I, am not your friend,
Well, not unless it suits,
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Kieran J1996
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Musa Ndhlovu 21 June 2014

The fact I like, you as you are. Beautiful Art. I like. Please read my poems and comment.

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Brian Jani 21 June 2014

This poem flows so neatly but the problem is I did not manage to understand what its about

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Unwritten Soul 16 May 2013

Just go away from something that hurt you, though you liked it much it better that way so someday...it maybe hard and hurt as well but if you not move on now it will be more hurt and harder...you decide_Soul

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Aria Siren 16 March 2013

Kieran- this is the first poem I have read by you and I'm not sure what it is about it-I really like it. To start, the title is great and grabs attention (at least mine) quickly. Almost flows like a song. I think what I like the most is the style, and how it is a narration of thoughts, a page from a journal. I'm going to read some more poems by you right now. ~Aria

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