I Shall Promise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Shall Promise

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Mistakes do occur
Take place as an error
But must of small nature
That happens everywhere

I tried my level best
To keep your honor and interest
In tact for all times
But could not fulfill sometimes

Take it as natural
As man wishes but meets denial
From nature and circumstances
You must consider it all times

Think of treachery
If committed ever by me
Consider of deception
If it was from inception

We had crucial days
We struggled to meet our ways
You were dedicated and sincere
That is why I before you here

We have to trust and last
Carry on with odd very fast
Overcome it in finest move
Love each other and prove

Let us be one once again
You should never be tense and remain
In full control of situation
As we are helpless to find its continuation

I shall promise
And stand with no choice
As you were the only one
From me no harm is to be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 October 2013

21 hours ago « Delete » Meri Jaan hmmmmmmm....niceeeeeeeee, tks Sir for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

good introspection rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai Oct 01,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

Dear Sir, The poem comes out as a beautiful song... With kind regards, Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela Oct 01,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2013

Kudos Steven Avolio6 minutes ago Kudos.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2013

Mistakes do occur Take place as an error

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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