I Started A Message Poem by Christine Gries

I Started A Message

Rating: 5.0


I started the message
a thousand times
Deleting it with a sigh
was our love a lie?

I started the message
wanting a sign
the night you held me close
did you have another on your mind?

I started the message
wanting to see
If your gaze
was looking right through me

I started the message
hoping you would say
that you were not
walking away

I started the message
and then hit delete
turned off the computer
and rose to my feet

I walked away
and didn't look back
at the computer screen
that was now black!

I Started A Message
Friday, July 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cheating,intuition,losing friends,lost love,love and life,relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on 10/7/2011. When you know it is over, but a little part of you denies it, however you come to terms, saving face.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 03 February 2019

I started a message to write a thousand words to praise your poem, but then just one word will suffice.... awesome! Thanks for sharing your sentiments through verse.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 July 2017

Such an awesome poem... rated 10+++++

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Christine Gries 29 July 2017

Thank you for taking the time to read this.

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