Friday, December 11, 2009

I Thought Of A Place Comments

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I thought of a place
A place where my soul could go to be alone.
From here to there with fragile wings
I have flown.
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Rani Turton
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Ben Gieske 24 December 2009

Some very interesting thoughts and you present them nicely. I don't know the answer. I think life has to be a constant searching without any lasting resting place.

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Al Ramos 22 December 2009

Enjoyed this poem very much. I think this place is in the afterlife.

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Ivor Hogg 20 December 2009

If there is I have not found it Yet.Perhaps one day we will all realise we are interdependent

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Ranjit Ravindran 11 December 2009

I have found that place deep within myself. Haven't been there since past 8 years. I must admit it was a bliss when I practiced meditation in those days. I don't know why I don't feel like going there now. This poem will inspire me to go there again. Thank you Ma'am.

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Fay Slimm 11 December 2009

Such a sad thing Rani that a place where the things you describe as practised would be hard to find.. may dreams such as yours come true one day....10 from Fay.

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