I'Ve Seen The World Comments

It's alive and beautiful Steve, Insightful and profound. I almost melt at every line I read. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Thank yall so much. The good thing is, every word is true and alive.

Excellent poem, , , [But it still feels all brand new I 've never see this before in a girl Cause after seeing you be mine I feel like I've seen the world].. I like these lines... Written well..my friend..

This is so beautiful- I especially like the lines 'Kiss me, this sunset will last all night And we'll just laugh about what we see in the clouds' It moves me to tears- Good job. I look forward to reading more of your work! -Claudia

I like the idea of seeing the world in someones's eyes. Being in her arms and completely content. nice write.

Really like this it reads well with a great flow. It would make a great song.