I'Ve Seen The World Poem by Steven Pettry

I'Ve Seen The World

Rating: 5.0


Another trip down a country road together,
I'm falling deeper into our own little world.
Our conversations go on forever.
And every kiss, longer than the one before.

I've seen the same things everyday with you

I cant believe this life we have is so sweet
When everything around us just breaks down.
Kiss me, this sunset will last all night
And we'll just laugh about what we see in the clouds.

I've seen the same things everyday with you
But it still feels all brand new
I've never seen this before in a girl
Cause after seeing you be mine
I feel like I've seen the world

Another walk in the pouring rain with you
I've never felt warmer or more in loved in my life
Hours later we return soaked and explain
We lost time and kept warm with our fire.

I've seen the same things everyday with you
But it still feels all brand new
I've never seen this before in a girl
Cause after seeing you be mine
I feel like I've seen the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 10 October 2011

Really like this it reads well with a great flow. It would make a great song.

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Theany Ouy 30 October 2011

It's alive and beautiful Steve, Insightful and profound. I almost melt at every line I read. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

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Steven Pettry 11 October 2011

Thank yall so much. The good thing is, every word is true and alive.

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Vipins Puthooran 11 October 2011

Excellent poem, , , [But it still feels all brand new I 've never see this before in a girl Cause after seeing you be mine I feel like I've seen the world].. I like these lines... Written well..my friend..

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Claudia Krizay 11 October 2011

This is so beautiful- I especially like the lines 'Kiss me, this sunset will last all night And we'll just laugh about what we see in the clouds' It moves me to tears- Good job. I look forward to reading more of your work! -Claudia

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Diana Rose Tolentino 11 October 2011

I like the idea of seeing the world in someones's eyes. Being in her arms and completely content. nice write.

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