Wednesday, January 11, 2006

I Wake With Your Name In My Mouth Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wake with your name
in my mouth
its the sweetest longing
on the loneliest tongue.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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jonni o 27 January 2006

When I first read this, it pretty much took my breath away. As Hound says, it's very powerful, and secretly, I wished that someone I know had written it. I'm glad I was able to find it and let you know. j.

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Poetry Hound 11 January 2006

When desire drives you to crazy things. Very powerful.

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Indiscreet Episode 11 January 2006

This is very moving. Well captured overwhelming sense of longing. I will surely be reading more of your work.

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