I Want Not - 04: The Status Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

I Want Not - 04: The Status

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I want not
That great designation
of a corporate job-
A collector,
A governor,
A professor,
A director,
That never fits to nourish the poor
That cares never for the weak ever,
That makes one tall enough
Not to see below,
That makes one rich enough
Not to see the hungry
or thirstyanywhere,
nor the helpless girl
unable to dream a life anymore,
blinded by the muscled.


I would rather be
a small farmer
somewhere near the slums
cooking myself under the smoke,
looking after my kids
nude from poverty,
caring my sick wife
waiting on death bed,
hugging my dusty daughter
half awake till my return
from day long loads of work
that tear me apart
each passing day
with tear, dust
and smoky life here.
I would rather be
a loving father,
a caring spouse and
a feeding farmer.

Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dedication,social behaviour,social comment,want
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 31 October 2018

WE EARN SOME VIRTUE THAT WE TAKE THIS WITH US TO THE HEAVEN. THE LIFE IS A GREAT GIFT OF GOD....WE WANT TO ENJOY OUR LIFE TO HELP ANOTHER AND THE POOR...THE GOD IS ALWAYS WITH US.

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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

That makes one rich enough Not to see the hungry A great sensible heart feels for the society. Great contribution Sir. 10+++

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

I would rather be a loving father, a caring spouse and a feeding farmer. What a lovely social vent of mind shown here. Thanks Sir for the lovely poem. 10+++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

I would rather be a loving father, a caring spouse and a feeding farmer. What a lovely social vent of mind shown here. Thanks Sir for the lovely poem. 10+++++

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

That never fits to nourish the poor That cares never for the weak ever, That makes one tall enough Not to see below, That makes one rich enough Not to see the hungry A great sensible heart feels for the society. Great contribution Sir. 10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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