Asif Andalib

Bronze Star - 2,391 Points (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

I Want To Love You Nonstop - Poem by Asif Andalib

I am so thirsty for love I want to love you nonstop
But you don’t care at all you don’t give me a single drop!

I love you more than myself so don’t be heartless
You have robbed my soul now you steal my happiness!

You have spellbound me so you seem to be the prettiest
How many times will you test my love please babe no more test!

I need you so much it’s hard to live without you
It will be so fantastic if you love me too!

Comments about I Want To Love You Nonstop by Asif Andalib

  • Luis Estable (10/6/2011 2:00:00 PM)

    Some of the lines are pure cliches used very much so in thsi type of poetry. With all your respect, at the beginning of the poem I thought you would do much better as the poem went on only to find out that that was not the case.

    You spoiled te chance of turning this into a fine try but there are three or four lines here that are nothing but trite writing I`m sorry to have to say to you.

    The best to you later or in your next try!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 6, 2011

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