Good are the things
That are proved to be helpful
Bad are the things
That are proved to be harmful
God knows best
What is good for us
And what is bad for us!
That’s why
We should listen to God.
In the eyes of God:
Good work is ten times better
Than bad work
Good work is like gold
And bad work is like cotton
Bad is an inseparable part of God
Just like good is!
God’s body is the Best
And Satan is the worst.
The closer we are to the Best
The luckier we are
The stronger we are
The better we are to the rest.
The concept/philosophy that you share in Stanza 2, is intuiging...The piece itself, as a whole, is unique, as it rings of a parablesque style...I like it...IIT IS GOOD...NO WAY BAD! ! ! Solid Work, Asif. FjR
Food for the soul... sush a wonderful piece to share about God, the balance of life and with a fine touch of religious advice...so true! God bless you and this piece, a 10.
Although I do not have belief in God, some features of good and bad are very well defined in your poem, in a way that any could read and understand- something that is always too underrated.
oNE MANS MEAT IS ANOTHER MANS POISON A VERY INTERESTING AND BELIEF CHALLENGING POEM GAURANTEED TO MAKE YOU THINK ABOUT THE BASICS OF rELIGION/PHILOSOPHY JIM
Interesting poems.. An invoking way of defining 'Good' and 'Bad'.. Also God who takes part on it.. Beautiful..
The concept put across in the poem is both interesting and thought provoking! Good deeds shall always out weigh the bad! -Raj Nandy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the second stanza..thought provoking... In the whole..There's a philosophy in it..everyone should know about... Great poem!