I Will Be Back Soon Poem by akram saqib

I Will Be Back Soon

Rating: 4.0


A letter from you
I get just now
Wish me come back
But tell me how?
In reply I say
Gloomy are my nights
And dreadful day
I too feel
Like fish out of water
But am to kneel
If I return
Think a little bit
Who will earn
The eyes that wait
Of our siblings
Fixed upon the gate
Nothing has I
Except your love
But can not buy
Livelihood I earn
My family for
I too yearn
I’ll be back home
After some time
Then shall we roam

Wait until then
I pile up a coffer
And return when

Friday, May 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: siblings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

lovely poem Akram... very nice one so simple, so smooth and so soft... yes it is love. 10.. Ali

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Bele Lele 13 August 2009

Ill give this a 10..

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Shams Tahir 12 June 2009

love expressed in great nostalgic manners

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Aarif Ameen 17 May 2009

ten + i liked it good luck

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Shweta Advani 17 May 2009

ur poem rings with so much truth...we forget to make a life coz we r engulfed in making a living...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Lovely and soft, silky 10++

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