akram saqib

Rookie - 441 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

I Will Be Back Soon - Poem by akram saqib

A letter from you
I get just now
Wish me come back
But tell me how?
In reply I say
Gloomy are my nights
And dreadful day
I too feel
Like fish out of water
But am to kneel
If I return
Think a little bit
Who will earn
The eyes that wait
Of our siblings
Fixed upon the gate
Nothing has I
Except your love
But can not buy
Livelihood I earn
My family for
I too yearn
I’ll be back home
After some time
Then shall we roam

Wait until then
I pile up a coffer
And return when

Comments about I Will Be Back Soon by akram saqib

  • (8/13/2009 2:31:00 PM)

    Ill give this a 10.. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 2:43:00 AM)

    love expressed in great nostalgic manners (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    ten + i liked it good luck (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2009 5:54:00 AM)

    ur poem rings with so much truth...we forget to make a life coz we r engulfed in making a living...10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    Lovely and soft, silky 10++ (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    lovely poem Akram... very nice one
    so simple, so smooth and so soft... yes it is love.
    10.. Ali
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 18, 2009

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