///Mother Poem by akram saqib

///Mother

Rating: 4.6


The beauty of butter flies
The freshness of flowers
In you alone lies
The passionate powers
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The shining of the gold
The softness of petals
Firm determination
in your bosom rattles
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The height of mountains
The colors of rainbow
The light of your love
Keep every body glow
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Understanding of a friend
Brightness of stars
Guidance of a sincere leader
Are just your metaphors
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beauty, freshness and love
height glory and shine
you bestow on your child
like that of spirits divine
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Collecting such loving traits
Nature does mother creates

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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it is beautiful poem. noi words will suffice the need. it is very good dear. read mine also 'O, mother'. you may find some similarity., , ,10

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Joseph Poewhit 12 May 2009

Nothing in the world better than good old MOM.

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Prabir Gayen 02 January 2019

Fine diction about Mother and her soul......

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Heartfelt tribute to a loving mum elegantly brought forth with thankful heart and glorifying tongue. Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing Akram and do remain enriched.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 November 2017

very beautiful Motherly poem u may read mine MOM'S SMILES you will surely like it

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2017

Firm determination in your bosom rattles beauty, freshness and love height glory and shine you bestow on your child like that of spirits divine beautiful description of your experience of t he mothers never ending love beautifully penned dear poet. Thank you ver ymuch for this poem. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

The height of mountains The colors of rainbow The light of your love Keep every body glow... yes, mother's love is most powerful and lovely like mountain and rainbow. Nice collocation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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