akram saqib

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///Mother - Poem by akram saqib

The beauty of butter flies
The freshness of flowers
In you alone lies
The passionate powers
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The shining of the gold
The softness of petals
Firm determination
in your bosom rattles
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The height of mountains
The colors of rainbow
The light of your love
Keep every body glow
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Understanding of a friend
Brightness of stars
Guidance of a sincere leader
Are just your metaphors
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beauty, freshness and love
height glory and shine
you bestow on your child
like that of spirits divine
--
Collecting such loving traits
Nature does mother creates


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  • Prabir Gayen (1/2/2019 11:19:00 PM)

    Fine diction about Mother and her soul...... (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (3/12/2018 9:55:00 PM)

    Heartfelt tribute to a loving mum elegantly brought forth with thankful heart and glorifying tongue. Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing Akram and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (11/28/2017 10:07:00 AM)

    very beautiful Motherly poem
    u may read mine
    MOM'S SMILES
    you will surely like it
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  • Drtony Brahmin (8/6/2017 1:56:00 PM)

    Firm determination
    in your bosom rattles
    beauty, freshness and love
    height glory and shine
    you bestow on your child
    like that of spirits divine

    beautiful description of your experience of t he mothers never ending love
    beautifully penned dear poet. Thank you ver ymuch for this poem. tony
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/1/2017 3:37:00 PM)

    The height of mountains
    The colors of rainbow
    The light of your love
    Keep every body glow... yes, mother's love is most powerful and lovely like mountain and rainbow. Nice collocation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    The beauty of butter flies
    The freshness of flowers
    In you alone lies
    The passionate powers.... it is only in you mother and no other....10

    i wrote O, mother pse read it also
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  • (5/29/2009 11:45:00 PM)

    'Collecting such loving traits
    Nature does mother creates'
    Lovely poetry!
    Fabulous expression!
    10+++++
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 1:28:00 PM)

    Stunning - 10+++

    'Collecting such loving traits
    Nature does mother creates'
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  • (5/13/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem, Mother is an eternal weakness or rather say eternal strength. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/12/2009 1:37:00 PM)

    Nothing in the world better than good old MOM. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/12/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    it is beautiful poem. noi words will suffice the need. it is very good dear. read mine also 'O, mother'. you may find some similarity., , ,10 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem
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  • (5/12/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    A nice poem that nbeeds a bit of chiseling. Rattle is too rattly for the spirit of the poem.

    H
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  • (5/12/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    A beautiful write. Thanks be to God for the gift of our mothers. well penned 10+++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 12, 2009



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